Looks good. Minor edits/amurricanizing attached.
On Tue, Oct 29, 2013 at 10:26 AM, Goodman, Eric <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Looks good
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> On Tue, Oct 29, 2013 at 9:30 AM, cheek, cris <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Here's the document cleaned from our last discussions.
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>> I want to send it to Lu today. Any last thoughts asap please. I'm sure the
>> amended wordage at the top can be vastly improved. Do please improve it. But
>> that's not the most important thing here. The most important thing is to get
>> the department to sign off on it:D
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>> Else i press send.
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>> cris
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